Why Leave So Soon?

by Something

Sat there, opposite me
Your locked on stare continues for one two three
Weary at first I was of you
Now i ask you not to leave so soon

I have had my doubts of your proposed intentions
you have changed all this in the last three seconds
now i know your departure looms, I ask must you leave so soon?

 

Submission date : 2015-07-26

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Ben Pickard ( F C D ) at 2015-07-29

I like the way this has been laid out and written - quite different. Good piece and well written

Claire Morris ( C D ) at 2015-07-30

It's simple and nice. I like it.