Another date

by Em

You light up my world
with your big, contagious smile;
rendezvous, next week?

Copyright: Em

 

Submission date : 2016-07-05
Last edit : 2016-07-06

Visits : 432
Votes : 4
Rating : 4.8

Latest comments

deeplydesturbed ( F P C D ) at 2016-07-05

He better answer yes! ;)

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-07-06

Hehehe :)

IdTakeABulletForYou ( F P C D ) at 2016-07-06

A cute poem, though after "smile", I suggest a semi-colon instead of a comma.

5/5
Much love,
IdTakeABulletForYou

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-07-06

Thanks S.

Grant Gilbert AKA Slash ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-28

Yes some people do that when they step into our lives dont they.

Grant