True love

by Ashton

I see you on a windy day out in the breeze, I am holding
Your hand and your kissing me , I feel like it's an dream but
I stop and it's not an dream then I realized I love you.

 

Submission date : 2016-08-24

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Latest comments

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-03

Ashton, this is a sweet little piece.

All I can say is an should be a and the your before kissing should be you're
Em

Ashton at 2016-09-05

Thank you