Wondering in Sweetness

by Bruno

Your soul remains within my beating heart,
the melody of our love to be contemplated so far.
My yearning mind rises to your guitar chords,
and jumps while whispering your name,
your name on my mind...
I am calmed by the pieces of you that I carry,
the ones that at first seamed so scary.
Still have hope to take all your sadness away,
sharing the most unique feeling day by day.
As I surrender to your sweetest touch,
now I know, I have no rush,
to stay home at the highest tree,
being surrounded
by just you and me.

 

Submission date : 2016-09-01

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Latest comments

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-03

Bruno, welcome to P&Qs.

This a a wonderful first poem by you portraying what love is to you. I like the imagery.

All the best, Em

Bruno at 2016-09-04

Em, thank you, it means a lot to me.

Wish you all the best in the world,
Bruno.