My Drug

by Cameo Newton

My Drug

It's been along time since I wrote you one
But your a blessing to me
The light at the end of the tunnel
When my life was full of tragedy
It's a wonderful feeling to know
I feel safe with you
My addiction to loving you is a drug
I can never give you enough
And my pleasure
is to keep giving you more and more

To ********

 

Submission date : 2016-09-01

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Latest comments

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-25

A sweet little piece with wonderful rhyming.
I hope the person this was intended for read it.

Em

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-25

Hi,

It's been along time since I wrote you one
But your a blessing to me

^^
=sweet and romantic lines

The light at the end of the tunnel
When my life was full of tragedy
^^
=strikingly powerful lines

It's a wonderful feeling to know
I feel safe with you
^^
= soft and full of feelings

My addiction to loving you is a drug
I can never give you enough
^^
= I have some suggestions here
My addiction (of ) loving you (,) is a drug.

And my pleasure
is to keep giving you more and more
^^
= already high in love here. ..

All in all this is a lovely piece

Gel

Cameo Newton ( P ) at 2016-09-27

Thank you that means the world to me