Fragrance of hope

by DarkLight

She read my soul
cupping it with her arms
right I move, her smile I see
left I try, all I see is her eyes.
Dark cloud is lifted
breaking me with the sunlight
leaving fragrance of hope
Who knew my cold ice heart was capable of feeling.

 

Submission date : 2016-09-10

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Ben Pickard ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-11

Hello Shanky.

A beautiful and inspirational poem here. I've always found it ironic that the very thing that can cause a hard, cold heart is often the only thing that can cure it: love.

Great write and all the best,

Ben

DarkLight ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-13

Thanks Ben

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-12

Shank what a beautiful little piece you have written. I agree with Ben though about it being ironic that the one thing that causes icy hearts is the one thing that cures them ans you portrayed this well. I guess love can be sp difficult at times yet beautiful.

All the best, Em

DarkLight ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-13

Em Thanks for that comment