I love You More Than Love (Anaphora form)

by Golden anGel Rhapsodist

I don't know if you are going to believe me,
If I'll say " I love you more than love".

I know It is crazy
but without you, I sob.

I'm not expecting something in return,
I just love you in the best way I can.

Not only in words that we speak
I love you in truth and in deed.

I love you more than love can say or do
I love you, not just it was you.

I love you with this heart so blind
I love you more than love~~~~~~

Even you hurt me I don't mind.



Author's note:

All of my compositions are labor of love, hurt, and pain..
Originally made from my own Experiences.
A copyright not a copycat.

Gel

 

Submission date : 2016-09-18
Last edit : 2016-10-06

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Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-21

Hi Augustus B.,

Nice to hear it from you. .Thanks for the suggestion. But I can't change it coz that's what I really meant.

"I love you more than LOVE" I can't change love for anything else coz there's nothing in the dictionary that can perfectly define what's more than Love. The highest form of love is already God. . so I can't use it here, it will be out of line.
hahaha but thanks to you. .If there's any error you found in here just tell me...suggestion and corrections make me grow better. ..very much appreciated.

Gel

Ben Pickard ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-07

Not only in words that we speak
I love you in truth and in deed.

^^

A lovely couplet there, Gel.

This is indeed a lovely poem but I guess it could be taken a little more darkly when we consider the idea of you putting up with anything from this person. Even being hurt.
Love really is a powerful emotion, isn't it?

Take care,

Ben

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-07

Yes, it is Sir Ben... Love can break us or even make us... the most powerful feeling ever.

thank you, Sir Ben

Gel

Mr Darcy ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-08

Hello Gel,

Love poems are always a favourite of mine. They are do relatable and so the connection between words and emotions are clear.

Well done,

Michael x

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-08

Thanks, Sir Michael..

So Nice of you,thanks for reading and for the comment..

TC
Gel



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