Nothing Less Than Divine

by Nicolette T

Darling being with you is all I need
Secluded from fear and society
With only feelings of satiety
With you I am safe, reassured and freed

You are astral, nothing less than divine
As the universe aligns for you
Lustreless skies turn blue
Oh darling how I'm glad that you're mine

Say it one more time, show me all your love
Kiss me tender
Never surrender
You are the only star, there's none above

 

Submission date : 2016-09-18
Last edit : 2016-09-18

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Ben Pickard ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-18

Thank you, Nicolette.

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-18

Oh Nicole, this is lovely... These lines standout

Say it one more time, show me all your love
Kiss me tender
Never surrender
You are the brightest star, there's none above
^^

butterfly in my stomach flew while reading this.
well done

Gel

Nicolette at 2016-09-18

Thanks a lot! I feel as though the last line could have been a lot better but I wasn't sure how as I couldn't find another sentence to finish with 10 syllables.

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-18

Nicolette, this is such a beautifully rhymed piece.

Welcome.
Em

Nicolette at 2016-09-18

Thank you again. :)



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