Your Heart (Concrete Form)

by Golden anGel Rhapsodist

------------I've got a----------------------------*hundreds *-------
---------hearts who begs--------------*for---me.----But--I *-----
--------chose the heart who--------*doesn't-- love---- me. *----
------The heart was once I--------*set free,-Who stole--my *--
-----heart and my memories.--*Even---your----tears----are *--
-----not---meant for me, just--ask,---I'll---dry----it,---just *----
-----turn--to me. I'll hug you---with--my----arms---open, *----
-----And--whisper shhh. With me,---I'm--sure---you---can.*----
-----On --my mind still, linger---the---way----you---talk *-----
------The--way----you---smile and---even--your---jokes.*------
-------The--way--you--bit--your--red---and----awesome *-------
--------Lips.---It----tickled---my---heart---down----to *----------
-----------my-fingertips.----I am---not--expecting *-------------
-------------anything--from--you,--Coz--I--can't *----------------
--------------own your--heart like--others-do.*-------------------
----------------You can live freely,-You--can *---------------------
-------------------love somebody,--Just *------------------------
-----------------------let me love you *---------------------------
----------------------------Endlessly. *-----------------------------
--------------------------------* :( *--------------------------------


Feb 28,2005



Author's note:

All of my compositions are labor of love, hurt, and pain..
Originally made from my own Experiences.
A copyright not a copycat.

Gel

 

Submission date : 2016-09-20
Last edit : 2016-10-06

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Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-21

Hi Dib,
Glad you're back..thanks for your time (precious time) lol. and also for the compliment
Have a great day
~Ate Gel

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-20

This is stunning!!

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-20

Thank you lovely Em

KEN ( F P C ) at 2016-10-05

I agree with EM, never seen anything like it!
Nominated!

Ken

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-05

Oh, thanks for that... :) I'm speechless



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