You Don't Kiss me Goodnight

by Golden anGel Rhapsodist

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Can I ask you what went wrong?
Why your love suddenly, was gone?
I thought we would get better than before
But you've got bitter and cold.

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I ask myself every night,
Why you never held me tight?
Is there someone new?
Or your love just got through?

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I can't imagine why I love you this much?
When you went other places, you don't keep in touch.
But still, I keep my eyes on you,
Even that you don't love me too.

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When you sleep, you turn your back on me,
When you sleep, you hug your pillow, not me.
When you sleep, do you dream of me?
Or you just dream of somebody?

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You don't kiss me goodnight,
It hurts me more and more.
You don't kiss me goodnight
It just got my heart tore



Author's note:

All of my compositions are labor of love, hurt, and pain..
Originally made from my own Experiences.
A copyright not a copycat.



Written : July 6,2010

 

Submission date : 2016-09-23
Last edit : 2016-10-06

Visits : 433
Votes : 2
Rating : 5.0

Latest comments

Autumn Breeze ( C D ) at 2016-09-24

I think this write of yours is truely amazing. You are very talented in writing love poems and I think it's great. Rhyming and flow is very fantastic. Every stanza is singing a great meaning of love which is coming from the depth of your heart. I like it..... oh! Lovers really like their partners write poem for them.

Well done. Keep on going.

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-24

Thank you Augustus. I love writing when I'm happy , hurt or angry. .. It let me described the feeling that I wanted to evoke...Thanks for the good feedback and for your time reading this

Gel

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-24

Gel, this is absolutely stunning and it all too relatable for me as I believe many others would be able to relate to it.
Love (I guess) can be so beautiful yet destroying too.

All the best and well done on yet another fab write.
Em

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-24

Thanks Em... love hurts yet beautiful.