Memories Of You

by Golden anGel Rhapsodist

Memories of you, flood back into my head
As I think about your letter that yesterday I read

I remember all the fun we had
Even though sometimes we're sad

We will forget each other never
And be best friend forever

Now that is over between you and me
The memories remain of what we use to be

We were so happy so perfect together
Have you forget or do you remember?

A love that was true,
How was it lost? I don't have a clue

I'm trying to forget you
how about you, do you try to forget me too?




Author's note:

All of my compositions are labor of love, hurt, and pain..
Originally made from my own Experiences.
A copyright not a copycat.


GEL@1999

 

Submission date : 2016-09-25
Last edit : 2016-10-06

Visits : 580
Votes : 2
Rating : 5.0

Latest comments

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-25

Gel, another beautiful piece from you.
I see the year lol I would have only been 10 then and starting out in the poetry world haha.
Lovely, Em

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-25

Hahaha yes Em I'm just 15 when I started writing poems.
by the way thanks for the compliment

Autumn Breeze ( C D ) at 2016-09-25

So, you are telling some classical loving memories about your past. I think this very special and also a very impressive write. I think this poem is a type of Couplet form. As I had told in my previous comment that you are so good at writing love poems, I say the same for this too. I think this is your strength. These memories often comes in people life, sometimes it brings great sadness and sometimes great happiness. It's a part of us all.

So you had written write a very long time ago, oh! and I have read today. I would had been only six years old when you wrote this. Ha ha! 20th Century poem.

I adore this write. Have a nice day.

Check grammatical errors.