Twas written in the stars (Tanka)

by Mr Darcy

'twas written in the stars...(tanka)



we danced by moonlight;
fluttering like butterflies,
surfing latent heat,
that whispered the promises
of an angel meant for me.






















michael
2016

 

Submission date : 2016-10-02
Last edit : 2016-10-11

Visits : 794
Votes : 11
Rating : 5.0

Latest comments

Brenda ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-10

Michael, Congratulations on a well deserved win. Beautiful Tanka.

Naughtymouse ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-10

This is amazing I love it! Congratulations on the win definitely should be on the front page :))

saggi at 2016-10-12

Love it.each line has given me goose bumps.touched and just deeply touched.

innocent chalera ( F ) at 2016-10-13

Amazing

Trish at 2016-10-14

Brilliant



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