Foundation

by Sunshine

Luminous heartbeats
warm darkened souls corrupted
by spurious love.

 

Submission date : 2016-10-06

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Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-06

James, I really liked this as it says so much in so little. Isn't it amazing that our true loves can stop the darkness. I honestly thought I had found someone who had stoped the darkness but he was just a fake man and caused more heartache.

All the best, Em

Brenda ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-06

James, very nice senryu. It spoke volumes of love gone bad. Well done-