Marshmallow that misses you (Senryu)

by Golden anGel Rhapsodist

Melted marshmallow,
That's me when I see you here
I miss you fervently.

 

Submission date : 2016-10-10

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Latest comments

Mr Darcy ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-10

Gel,

Lovely alliteration that makes my heart melt.

Well done,


Michael x

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-10

Hahaha thank you for that beautiful comment Sir

:)

Gel

Autumn Breeze ( C D ) at 2016-10-14

Very nice love senryu. There's great profound meaning is hidden among these three lines that only a loving heart can understand.

This is very fantastic again.

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-14

Again thanks Augustus for reading. .

have a nice day