LOVE

by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist & deeplydesturbed

Love

Love, such a beautiful word
Love flows off the tongue like a song to a bird
Love, flowing from each inch of my heart
Love, so many expressions where do I start

Love can make us
or, love can throw you under a bus
Love can give a new meaning to life
Love can also give you a lot of strife

Love can make you go stir crazy
Love can make you do things that are naughty

But love is the most powerful word
It can take you anywhere in the world.

 

Submission date : 2016-12-28
Last edit : 2016-12-28

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Golden AnGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-01

Thanks Sir Ben...

Mr Darcy ( F P C D ) at 2016-12-29

*coughs and raises one interested eyebrow*

A collaboration from two of the finest ladies on this site.

Love has the ability to lift a person, make them feel like they are flying, dangling from helium filled heart shaped balloon. Love also, has the ability to be a jealous looking chap/ess and shoot a green pellet through the heart of said balloon and make the love struck fool fall to the ground with a thump!

Well done, a clever write from two minds. Me, well, I am always in two minds. No you're not!

My favourite part:

...or, love can throw you under a bus
^
this did make me laugh - sorry!

Take care,

Michael xx

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-12-29

Ladies, ladies, ladies... This is a fantastic collab about the ups and downs of love yet honest and also funny in parts which love can also be when it is given and received properly. It also has perfect rhyming throughout which makes it all the more enjoyable to read for me anyway.

1/ Yes, love is a beautiful word but some people unfortunately use is falsely and freely alot of the time which can hurt us like hell. I imagine the birds tweeting as much as the word love is used and my goodness it's alot, right? Some people have alot of love to give and others just couldn't give a tosh.

2/ Love can be many things and I believe the first two lines in this to be true because being loved can heal many of us and if we do not get love others hurt and so unthinkable things because they haven't got the love they need to want. I've never really received a 'true' love so to me it would bring a new life and make me happier but right now it just causes me heartache and pain. I must say I wasn't expecting the bus line but it did bring a smile to my face.

3/ Love can make us go crazy ans most definitely do naughty things that we wouldn't do otherwise but I guess thats life..

4/ Yes it is one of the most powerful yet overused words in any dictionary and people would do anything for love, I guess.

You wrote so flawlessly about love so it's a 10 from Em :)

[ Praised by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist | Approved by hiraeth ]

Augustus Black ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-07

Very cute.

Well, you have amazingly defined the glory of love. But still many people on this earth don't understand the reality of love, and thus causes many crimes.

So, it's a great message for the whole mankind.

Well done. Deserves 5/5.

Golden AnGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-07

Thank you very much dear brother



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