Little Things In LOVE!!!

by Kumar

Sometimes a little smile,sometimes a little glare,
is what makes me feel you will always take care,
Sometimes a few words,sometimes a little touch,
is what tells me why do i love you so much.

Sometimes a little silence,sometimes a little kiss,
is what tells me the things i love and dearly miss,
Sometimes a helping hand,sometimes a little tear,
is what assures me,in sadness u will always be near.

Sometime a little walk beside me,when I'm in happiness,
assures me u will walk in front when there is darkness,
Sometimes a little prayer,sometimes a little fight,
is what makes our life beautiful each and every night.

sometimes a little separation,sometimes a little together,
is what assures me our love will last forever.
Sometimes a little fear,sometimes a little lie,
is what tells me u will always love even if i die,

these little things is what brightens up our face,
true love happens only if these things takes place,
in love-these things takes only little time,little heart,
to tell your mine and I'm yours and we we will never depart.

 

Submission date : 2004-09-21
Last edit : 2007-04-12

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Michael D Nalley ( F P C D ) at 2004-09-22

another one full of passion

megha ( F P C D ) at 2004-09-22

beautiful poem!!!!! :-)

Trincy ( F P C D ) at 2004-09-23

Awww.. this is also so beautiful... Yeah little things are the big issues in love.. You captured it so well... Great flow and great poem. Take care, Love, trincy.

Robert ( F P C D ) at 2004-09-24

very good but had some spelling issues but it was a good read anyway may want to look over it once more before posting it good job though

PrInCeSs1210 at 2008-03-20

Wonderful poem!!! i really loved reading it. it was very touching, and just great. good job! ur an awsome poet!!!!

take care

Jenny



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