I Wish

by Mia

I wish I were your pillow,
So you would hold me tight.
I wish I were invisible,
So i could watch you sleep at night.
I wish I was the sun,
So I could warm you with my rays.
I wish I were the rain,
So I could brush upon your face..
I'd wish on every star,
To have just one wish come true,
So I could be with you.

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Submission date : 2005-02-17
Last edit : 2007-07-13

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Latest comments

hadia ( F C D ) at 2008-01-30

Awww, so sweet!
this seems so like professional.
wow, you're really good at writng poems(:

Julio at 2008-03-29

It's amazing how someone can make these words sound so pretty. would you mind if i sended this to a girl i really like

Julio at 2008-03-29

It's amazing how someone can make these words sound so pretty. would you mind if i sended this to a girl i really like

Hustle Hard ( F C ) at 2008-05-08

Ohhh your good. hehe, something i would want this guy that i want to be with to read. lol!

Su ( F C ) at 2010-05-07

U wish u were god



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