I Don't Know...

by DReAMeRgRL18

I don't know how to tell you
I don't know if you care
I want to say I like you
But I don't even dare

It's true you may not like me
But I can't help the way I feel
I don't know why I feel this way
But I know this feeling is real

You don't know how hard it is
To see you but cannot to care
There's nothing else that I can do
But just to secretly stare

Sometimes I just want to cry
And wash this feeling away
If only it were that easy
I wouldn't be feeling this today...

 

Submission date : 2005-04-11
Last edit : 2007-04-20

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Latest comments

Janae ( D ) at 2007-09-26

Oh wow, i love this. that is exactly how i feel...good job! you put tears in my eyes!

rona ( P ) at 2007-11-09

I love your poems... every words you've said its true. because this is the way i felt.

dAnCe4aDrEaM ( F C ) at 2008-03-24

Wow your poems truly catch the heart! i love them!

i can relate to SOO many of them!

jyzka ( F ) at 2008-07-13

Yeah!!
it's really really hard to tell someone that you do like him... it takes a lot of courage.. that's why some of us just tend to put it in words, write a poem so that, somehow they'll be able to express what is in their heart..

anyway, for your poem, nicely done...
flows smoothly keep it up!

Su ( F C ) at 2010-05-07

Excellent!



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