Just Friends?

by LeAnNe

I love you more every day,
My name I long for you to say.
Do you know just how I feel?
Do you know this love is real?
Sometimes I wonder what you think.
When you hear my name, do your cheeks turn pink?
Do you dream about me every night?
Wish to hug me and hold me tight?
Do you think we're meant to be?
Together forever, you and me?
These are the questions that run through my mind,
Your way into my heart, you did find.
It drives me crazy as to what I should do,
Should I risk a friendship and confess to you?
Or should I keep my feelings inside,
Keep them locked up, let them hide?
I just don't know what to do anymore,
My heart it aches, my heart it's sore.
I love you more than you could know,
And I don't want to ever let you go.
So even if I'm just a friend,
I'll always love you until the end.

 

Submission date : 2003-09-20
Last edit : 2008-05-14

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Indie at 2013-12-11

This is good i enjoyed it but a little tip i mean only if you want it. just remember to flow and not have a poetry line be to much longer than the others. I always have to keep that in mind. I can also relate to this poem. BUt overall it was good. Good job!

Dominique Lewis ( F P C D ) at 2014-01-15

I adore this. It is often hard to express how we truly feel because we are scared of what may happen. I hide from the truth sometimes...the truth that I love him still. It is irritating to keep it inside because you don't want to loose your friend, but you also do have strong feelings for them. :/ 5/5 from me. This is well written and describes the heart's many questions.

Jyoti Rawat ( F P C D ) at 2014-01-27

I read this poem once again.
Really very nice poem in this poem as u describe the feeling, these are true lover feelings.

Olufunke Kolapo at 2014-08-24

An interesting love piece.

Fiona Rodricks ( F C D ) at 2015-09-13

Good write



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