In Love

by Elissa

When there's that special person
You just can't get off your mind
If you look in your heart
That person you will find

No matter how much they hurt you
They still mean so much
Because you feel as though you'd die
Without there gentle touch

And when your with them
You feel so free
There is no doubt in your mind
That this is how it's supposed to be

You feel so happy
With them by your side
You step out of the shadows
For there is no more reason to hide

You walk out of the darkness
And into the light
They make your life happy
They make everything right

They take away your confusion
They take away your pain
They show you the bright side
And all there is to gain

Life is worth living
Your smile won't go away
Everything is perfect
In every single way

You know what your feeling
And you look up above
Everything is beautiful
Because your in love

 

Submission date : 2005-05-13
Last edit : 2007-11-07

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Cara ( F P ) at 2005-05-14

that is just how i feel about my boyfriend.... amazing poem.. you have a wonderful gift hun. keep it up

S2 ya

Cara

PainOfOne ( F C ) at 2005-05-14

I love the flow.... 5/5 none to less.. take care (always)) xx:

*> : PainOfOne

lavie at 2005-05-21

i totally loved you poem. it really means so much to me . i felf you wrote it to me.

BeccaBoo at 2005-05-21

Great Job i love it! keep going!

shane simmons at 2005-05-21

this poem is so good. its just how i feel thanx for putting it in words for me



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