Love

by Tashhh

The love we share, has made us one.
From rising moon, to setting sun.
On your wings, my heart does soar.
Across the sea, and along the shore.
Into the future and back to the past.
The happiness we have will always last.
When we met, your lips I kissed.
So soft and gentle, moistened by mist.
Your eyes they stared, into my soul.
Made me realize, with you I'm whole.
So yes my love, this you know.
Throughout eternity, I won't let go.
My love is yours, forever true.
Words can't measure, my love for you.

 

Submission date : 2005-05-22
Last edit : 2007-04-26

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sarah jenkins ( F P C ) at 2005-05-28

This is a pretty good little poem, you have a nice way of writing! if you get a chance, i'd like it if you looked at my poem, "Untitled 23". Thanks, Sarah

aisha heyward at 2005-05-30

omg this poem was off the huck I really enjoy your writing your words really hit home your thought in this poems was truly amazing i really can't stress how good your poem is .......but can you please check out my poem it's called i got question and be looking forward for some more of my work.

dawn green ( F C ) at 2007-05-29

Hard to believe that your only fourteen
the way you write is so pristine
i can't wait to read what you write when your twenty-four
i bet you a book deal you will score!!!

keep up the good work!
i am very impressed!
God Bless!

danielle ( F C ) at 2007-10-23

Good job this is great!! 5/5

ketaki at 2016-07-23

Simply great work.... lovely poem



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