Submission date : 2005-05-22
Last edit : 2007-04-26
sarah jenkins ( F P C )
This is a pretty good little poem, you have a nice way of writing! if you get a chance, i'd like it if you looked at my poem, "Untitled 23". Thanks, Sarah
omg this poem was off the huck I really enjoy your writing your words really hit home your thought in this poems was truly amazing i really can't stress how good your poem is .......but can you please check out my poem it's called i got question and be looking forward for some more of my work.
dawn green ( F C )
Hard to believe that your only fourteen
the way you write is so pristine
i can't wait to read what you write when your twenty-four
i bet you a book deal you will score!!!
keep up the good work!
i am very impressed!
danielle ( F C )
Good job this is great!! 5/5
Simply great work.... lovely poem