Submission date : 2005-06-12
Last edit : 2008-01-22
A beautiful poem.Well done! Keep writing more poems...
Steven ( F P C D )
whoa o.O that was a really nice poems... keep it up!!
I LIKED YOUR POEM A LOT. I THOUGHT ALL THOSE THINGS WHERE THIS GUY I DATED FOR 207 DAYS AND THEN HE LEFT ME WITHOUT SAYIN WHY.
christina ( F P C )
very sweet, great job
5/5 keep it up
steve ( F C D )
Beautiful and sweet poem but I dont understand if its for an ex or a current boyfriend because some of it is present tense and some in past tense