My dream to be kissed in the rain

by Kassie

I always had this silly little dream.
This dream to get kissed in the rain.
It always seemed so romantic in the movies i seen.
Little did i know that soon my dream would come true,
and the best part about it is i would share it with you.
You took me by the hand and we walked down the driveway.
By now i knew that my dream was going to come true,
this was definitely the day.
You stopped and pulled me toward you,
as you slowly put your hands around my waist...
leaned in to wards me and soon it was only your lips that i could taste.
The drops fell upon us as we stood there and kissed in the rain,
and i knew after this i wouldn't feel the same.
You made my dream come true,
and i don't know what to say.
Except I'm glad that it was you that kissed me in the rain.


*It sucks.. yes i know. But please comment anyways, and let me know what you think.

 

Submission date : 2005-06-19

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katie at 2005-06-20

*aw this was so cute I have dreamed about that since I was little it really does look so cute in movies....I'm still wait for my dream to come true*

hEaRtBrOkEn at 2005-06-20

awsoem poem! really cute and sweet. and it defidently doesn't suck, i love it......by the way....i think its every girl's dream:)

tom swart ( F P C ) at 2005-06-20

kissed in the rain? Not bad - keep up the good words.

karen ( F C ) at 2005-07-11

that didn't suck..i loved it!! 5/5! keep up the good work..thanks for the comment on mine!

Penelope Pea Pod ( F C ) at 2005-07-19

hey awesome poem. it didnt suck at all girl! lol that has always been a dream of mine but im still waitin for it to come true. anyways great job and keep up the terrific work! hugs and kisses



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