Love is where you are... !

by Amelia

Whenever there's a helping hand,
or a word of encouragement,
whenever there are cheerful thoughts,
or hope thats Heaven-sent,
whenever a garden's tended to
or lovely music sounds,
wherever there is laughter
and happiness abounds..
whenever there's an open door,
a hug, a kiss , a smile..
whenever there's someone glad
to walk with you a mile...
wherever there are faith and trust,
and hearts that really care...
whenever the world is beautiful
you'll know that love is there...
its always been wonderful
to be there with you,
because wherever you are...
my love is there too !


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Submission date : 2005-07-10
Last edit : 2007-04-14

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Jessica at 2007-04-14

I luv it! This poem made me smile =) I never was good a rhyming but you just perfected it!
5/5!

KAZ ( F P C ) at 2007-09-09

BEA-uuu tifulll wrkkkk... u have some gr8 poems .. but i gues this ones the best... hats off.. to you... keep on writin...

Kenny ( F P C D ) at 2007-09-30

Amzing piece you have. . I have nothing to say. Great job

Unknown Substance ( F C ) at 2008-01-26

Yet again another great poem you sure have got lots of talent how bout sharing?! Lol

Loved the ending 5.5

XUrXLossXNotXMineX at 2009-01-11

I loved it :]
you write really well <3

Love,
Lisa Marie



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