If I ever

by Sarah White

If I ever make you cry
Then I might as well not live
Cause I've failed the one thing
God gave me as a gift.

If I ever break your heart
Know mine is breaking too
Cause I could only be happy
Knowing your smile is true.

If I ever make you doubt
My love for you is real
Look in my eyes and hear my heart
And you'll know just how I feel.

If I ever say goodbye
Know it won't be for long
Cause lifes too hard to live
Whenever you are gone.

 

Submission date : 2005-07-11
Last edit : 2007-05-07

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amelia ( F C D ) at 2005-09-21

Wow isnt this poem amazing ???? i wonder who couldve given it any vote less than 5...clearly one of the best poems in this site !
great job ! 5/5

kelsey ( C ) at 2005-10-03

Hey. that was awesome. written really well. it had great rhyme and rhythm. awesome! 5/5

kelsey
xoxoxox

Andrew Kirkman ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-17

Another touching piece. Well Done

Gabriela ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-19

This is a really sweet poem, I love it, has a cute message, keep writing.

Mums Pink Princess ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-05

Awwww, i think this is my fave so far, i feel this way about someone too and i cant believe you have worded it so well. thank you for sharing your poems i think you have a very good talent xxxx



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