Beauty Beyond Compare (Doditsu)

by Steven Beesley

A beauty beyond compare
Such grace, charm and loveliness
Alluring me to your side
Lost inside your love


Doditsu:
The Doditsu is a fixed folk song form of Japanese origin and often portrays love or humor as subject matter.

It comprises 26 syllables made up of four lines of 7-7-7-5 syllables respectively. It usually does not rhyme.

Submission date : 2005-07-22

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