So Kill Me

by Matters

So kiss me like you did,
My heart stopped beating.

So love me like you did,
The memories are fleeting.

So hold me like you did,
I promise not to go,

So have me like you did,
Digging deep below.

So hide me like you did,
Take away my presence.

So leave me like you did,
Evacuate my essence.

So hate me like you did,
Don't clot my endless bleeding.

So kill me like you did,
My heart stopped beating.



Yeah, the first line was inspired by a line from a song, but it was just inspiration, not plagiarism.

 

Submission date : 2005-11-30
Last edit : 2007-06-01

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Ŧhe Angelic ₣airy ( F P C D ) at 2005-12-08

I miss your poems...so so very much...so sorry lol...I'm not grounded from the com...just haven't got much time on it...well...this is one great piece...short and simple...yet deep and sweet...

.adrian ღ hendryx. at 2005-12-10

Holy this is also an amazing poem... i dont know what to say! i liked how you wrote it and kept using the word did.... it made it originallll haha
xo adge

equilibrium ( F C ) at 2005-12-21

I love all of your poems. They are so, amazingly done. I look forward to reading more. EQUILIBRIUM


Clare at 2007-06-18

Fantastic poem. Short and sweet. I like the words you've used, and that this poem stands out.

omar ( F C D ) at 2012-06-30

Whoa awesome poem. I liked the flow of this poem.



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