My Greatest Fear

by Lu

This fear I feel deep inside
follows me around, never far from my side

Can you promise it will always be
us forever ... for eternity ?

No amount of love can erase
the fear that another, could take my place

Painfully arguments are hard to swallow
will colored rainbows always follow ?

As we age and grow old
could our love die, turning cold ?

I know you would give me the stars above
yet can you promise me eternal love ?

My greatest fear will always be
that someday... you will stop loving me



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Submission date : 2006-01-23
Last edit : 2012-01-21

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Erika at 2006-01-31

I think that your poem was good

Danielle at 2006-01-31

I loved this poem. Everyone in love always has this feeling and you put it into words really good!

neens ( F P C ) at 2006-02-01

Luanne You have such an awesome talent. I love reading your poems. It has been a while. but I will rate and comment on as many as possible.
~neens~

x~broken~angel~x ( F P C ) at 2006-04-18

Nice poem, i read one of yours and had to keep reading, you are very talented :)
love steph

Jonathan at 2007-04-16

Awesome poem!



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