Why???

by ♥shyann♥

Why does god bless us with so much
just to take it all away,
why do words fly out of peoples mouth
if they don't mean what they say,

why do people make promises
only to let you down in the end,
why do people give you there love
just to leave you with a broken heart to mend,

why do the stars still shine
if wishes don't come true,
why does my heart still beat
if its no longer good enough for you

why does my face wear a smile
when all i want to do is cry,
why am i still living period
if were only waiting to die

why do memories replay in my mind
if it aint gonna change back time,
why does my heart choose to love you
if your no longer meant to be mine

why do i still see you in my dreams
if in reality your no longer with me,
why did we even meet in the first place
if we were never meant to be,

although i don't have the answers
the one thing i'll always know,
is no matter what life sends my way
your the reason i cant let go!!!

 

Submission date : 2006-02-01
Last edit : 2006-07-19

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Rating : 5.0

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KAZ ( F P C ) at 2007-09-09

Gr88 wrk!!!

Shokry ( F C ) at 2007-11-03

I do like it the way, words and every thing :)

5/5

xXMohawkedMahemXx ( F ) at 2007-11-26

Amazing poem...

left me speechless... beautifully written... you have amazing talent =]

great job...

5/5

xxx

XxFallenxFromxGracexX ( F P C D ) at 2008-08-21

OMG i loved this poem so much!
it perfectly described the way i feel at the moment
like exactly

this is such a great poem i luv it

xxx 5/5!!

ThugPoet ( F P C D ) at 2009-04-10

This is an extremely well writren poem Shyann and if you dont mind... I would like to write a response to it. It sort of gave me alot of ideas and I think it would work really nicely. I'm goint to write, you tell me what you think. = )

Hope you are well sister. Hope you to hear from you soon.

Take care.
Your brother,

Thuggy = ).



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