Keep On Living

by Laura

Under the spell you cast
Each moment was a blast
Now happy times have past
Our memories will always last

Now you are gone
I must carry on
Only by being strong
Alone after so long

With each new day
I try to find a way
To keep on living
In a world unforgiving

 

Submission date : 2006-03-13
Last edit : 2007-04-18

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Davely at 2006-03-21

Great poem umm at my school i'm doing this project where i'm supposed to put 10 poems of authors who put poems i hope i could use ur poem (don't worry i will not put it as mine)
plz send me ur reply at duvalingirl@yahoo.com
GREAT POEM holla back gurl

♥Angela♥ ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-26

Wonderful write Laura..... although a relationship has ended and it brings forth pain this write gives the message of a very postive and hopeful outlook for the future. Keep on writing......

Eibutsina ( F P C D ) at 2006-04-11

Short but strong, direct...and somewhat intense...great poem hun keep it up :O)
PS: Thanks for your comment!
Risa

Bridgette ( F P C D ) at 2006-05-01

This is really good.. especially for such a short poem. You did a great job on this. I can definitely relate to this. Great job! 5/5*

Skry ( F C ) at 2006-05-02

Short and to the point and no less powerful for it. Emotional and evocative, beautiful 5/5 x



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