LOVE- TRUELY PURE...

by PURE HEART

Love me the way i want you to,
grasp me in your arms as u always do.
I feel an ease melting in your arms,
you set me free, u set me calm.

Make me lay my head on your shoulder,
I feel your strength inside me and u make me bolder.
Your hands crawling so gentle over my hair,
from deep down i feel a touch of care.

You pull me tightly much closer to you,
you can feel me and the same i can do.
Your hands hold mines tightly,
and i get lost in your world slightly.

Give me the love i always desired for,
let me feel the soul of yours.
My heart now wants nothing more
just your LOVE thats truely pure....

 

Submission date : 2006-03-19
Last edit : 2007-05-02

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sarah ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-27

Thanks for your comments meant alot,I have read just about all your poems, and all are great keep writing so i can keep reading take care hun sarah x

Italian Stallion ( F P C D ) at 2006-04-08

Absoultly beautiful, I loved it. You have an amazing way of making the words flow. Awesome Job. once again don't use Slang. instead of u use you.
Keep up the good work.

Ann Marie ( F C D ) at 2006-04-08

Another very nice poem.

I feel your strength...
Your hands crawling..
lost in your world...

Great work!

Ann Marie ( F C D ) at 2006-04-08

Another very nice poem.

I feel your strength...
Your hands crawling..
lost in your world...

Great work!

Adriana ( P C D ) at 2006-04-11

I like this one....Like I said on the other ones you are a really talented poet



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