Every Season

by Goran Rahim

Tonight,
I tried to
As much as I could
Write some nice words about you.
But my pen froze
As soon as I wrote,
I love you.
When I asked for the reason
The pen said,
She doesn't deserve your love,
Like the colors of the leaves
She changes every season.

 

Submission date : 2006-05-12
Last edit : 2007-04-25

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Layla at 2006-11-25

Wow. Short- but it says it ALL. 5/5

LoganL ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-19

I love how you compared a person to the changing of the seasons. 5/5

Wallace ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-12

Amazing poem, you truly have a talent, excellent work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

auddria at 2008-03-29

It was nice but short XD

Danielle at 2012-11-09

Written beautifully.



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