Submission date : 2006-07-06
Last edit : 2007-07-07
Mustardhart ( F P C D )
I love this one, tis beautiful and wholistic. Gr8 job keep it up man
Deana ( F P C D )
I really liked the style of this poem different and refreshing. Also beautiful words and emotions.
Robie ( F C D )
I love the style of your poem! this is another beuitifull poem! donno what to say!
Quite a good poem,may be a little obvious.I'm saying this because I've just read father's love and...There's no camparison between the two!!!That's why I won't vote this one,because giving that a 5 I would have to give this a three and your average would get lower.The poem flows well and you've got a good writing technique.The theme is though seen too many times.Try something new...You can do it...excellent writer!
~ღ~ jeSSica ~ღ~ ( F P C D )
Cute poem! i like it! =)