Forever and Always

by Darien

Forever and Always

Waiting at the altar with a single rose,
My eyes caught hers and then I froze.
Smiling at me from across the room,
She is my bride, and I am her groom.

The wedding march plays for awhile,
Gracefully she walks down the aisle.
As she approaches I see a vivid light,
She is my angel all dressed in white.

Her eyes glistened through her veil,
Like something out of a fairy tale.
She spoke with her cute subtle tone,
Promising we would never be alone.

"I will always be here to lend a hand,
Just remember I am forever your man.
I'm at your side through thick and thin,
Together on this journey we will win."

My wedding vows saved in my head,
About to speak but I stopped instead.
Staring right at her my words choked,
But something from my heart spoke.

I looked at her, and then said aloud,
'Forever and always' is what I vowed.
"From here on out we start a new life,
Together forever, as husband and wife."

 

Submission date : 2006-07-10
Last edit : 2007-04-13

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AblissfulDREAMER ( F C D ) at 2008-04-29

The title was beautiful. So simple yet filled with so much meaning. I loved your opening stanza because it just lured me into this beautiful scene and I was eager to read more because you described the emotions flawlessly. The flow of this was so fluid and everything seemed to come so naturally for you which was enjoyable to read. I loved how you ended it because it completed the scene nicely. Well done *5/5*

Adriana at 2008-06-24

Aww tats soo cute

Ian ( F C ) at 2010-04-20

I need a tissue Lol. Great poem. I loved it.
reminds a little of how I am

Ian ( F C ) at 2010-05-11

Awesome. i love this poem. great writing and choice of words to rhyme.

DGAF Hate on it ( F P C D ) at 2010-12-12

Beautiful! i love this poem its amazing.. ur a great poem.. keep up the good work!



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