My Poems

by Goran Rahim

I have been
Telling my every poem
How cute you are.
But now I am ashamed to tell them
You are disrespectful to
Me, my love, and every poem
I have written so far.
I don't want them to think
I am a liar
I am not
It was you
who set my heart on fire.

 

Submission date : 2006-07-15
Last edit : 2007-04-30

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Neil Marsden ( P ) at 2008-01-20

What an amazingly crafted little piece, well done!
Neil.

TearsFallingForOnlyYou ( F ) at 2008-02-11

Awwww

soooo sweet and sad at the same time

TearsFallingForOnlyYou ( F ) at 2008-02-11

Awwww

soooo sweet and sad at the same time

Johana Tapia ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-17

Aw wow this poem is really good.=)

LoVerSLaND ( F P C ) at 2011-09-02

Realy deep & and simple. 5/5



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