Fallen From Heaven

by Natalie

You had fallen from heaven straight into my arms,
Igniting my heart with your sweet seductive charms.
Showed me light in life that I'd never seen before,
Something that my heart and soul had been longing for.
Spread your caring angel wings right over my head,
Protecting me and saying what had not been said.

Those three simple words that I was needing to hear,
Were right in-front of my blind eyes but was unclear.
Clouds were smothering me and all that was around,
Until an angel flew down and then you were found.
The smoke disappeared leaving a vision of you,
A strong feeling of love that seemed long overdue.

The way that you would shelter my soul from the rain,
As you would clear away the storm ridding my pain.
You'd feel and heal the beating of my broken heart,
Painting a smile on my face like a piece of art.
Released all the emotions that were trapped inside,
Warm fuzzy feelings that I'd always try to hide.

Romantic enchanted fairy-tales pranced in my mind,
In books of make believe; my prince I needed to find.
Sweet tunes would play as I would look into your eyes,
And I could see the man who was hidden in disguise.
The Savior who had fallen from heaven above,
Is now the angel who helped me believe in love.

© Natalie 2006

 

Submission date : 2006-08-01
Last edit : 2007-04-17

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рортаят™ ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-12

Wow. That was awesome. I loved every part of this poem. It was sweet, and very heart touching. Awh.. I feel like re-reading it. :] Great Job Deary.

//Tragically Beautiful\ ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-12

Inticing, seductive poem. Beautifully written and put together. The flow was nearly perfect and it was quite original, for a love poem.
5/5

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Mr_blueknight ( F C D ) at 2006-08-14

Awesome the first stanza was very very good starter and the third stanza was great also i love those stanze and hey a very good emotion and vivid details great piece

geneross

Wallace ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-02

Excellent love poem, I've always thought that love poems were the best poems and you reminded me of that.

c 0 n f u s e d ( F C D ) at 2008-02-24

WOOOOOOW! :X nice work.



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