To See Your Beautiful Smile

by Goran Rahim

To see your beautiful smile,
I will cross a border.
I will fly like a bird,
As it is my heart's order.

My eyes are restless,
To see your beautiful smiles.
I have promised my heart
That I will go thousand miles.

To see your beautiful smile,
I will change my own way.
I will break the chain of values,
No matter what the world say.

 

Submission date : 2006-08-02
Last edit : 2007-04-11

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julia at 2006-10-20

Your polem is really really goood!
you should write heaps.... your a pro!!

Scrittore ( P C ) at 2006-12-18

Awesome!!

CaRpEDiEm at 2007-04-16

Good confession;)

Alyssa at 2007-04-17

Aww.. thats so sweet ...That would be cute for a boy to say that to a girl. if it was me id cry :)

REVS ( F P C ) at 2008-01-30

Omg i fell in love with this poem just by the title! its amazing and exactlly what u'd need to wingle ur way into any girls hart!



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