Stuck In The Past

by Jessica

Stuck in the past, caught in a net
My broken heart has not given up yet
Yearning for you, crying at night
Trapped in the dark, fighting for light..

Emotions tied tight, impossible to retreat
My brain waiting for my heart to delete
Jumbled thoughts flow through my mind
A safe, peaceful place they must find..

Please God relieve me of this pain
And pour all these feelings down the drain
Free me from the past, untangle this net
For another man I have met..

 

Submission date : 2006-08-03
Last edit : 2007-04-11

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Latest comments

Jenni ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-10

I liked this very much. You have talent. Keep up the good work.
Much love.


BrokenSmile at 2006-08-10

Wow! your poem is gr8! i lovved it! goin thru a similar thing ma self 2.

briana renee ( F C ) at 2006-08-10

Wow that was really good!! i love the rythem and the flow of it!! keep it up
:-)


Jasmyn ( F P C ) at 2006-08-10

This was good.

Rachel ( D ) at 2006-08-11

Very good poem once again, it flows really well and all fits together.
xx



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