My Fairytale's Illusion

by TinyDancer46

A heart he stole away from me
Right from my bleeding chest
And through the wounds, I gave him love
For he deserved the best

A treasure I held in my hands
That promised he would stay
My prince I had now, finally
He'd never go away...

But through the stormy weather
With the lies I failed to see
My prince had found a princess
And he loved her more than me...

Yet I couldn't see the damage
Through the dark storm, I was blind
Conceived by what I dreamed for,
Love was perfect in my mind...

Till one day, lightening struck me
My prince left without a trace
My broken heart screamed out his name
While tears poured down my face

Now I'm crying on this wooden floor
Wishing then I knew
That fairy-tales are make-believe
And dreams do not come true

 

Submission date : 2006-08-22
Last edit : 2013-01-20

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Latest comments

LushPlush at 2013-06-09

I love your poem. I look around at my family and I see that there's only a few happy endings. I've come to realize that fairy tales are just that. They are make believe. Telling the little girls that you can fall in-love in an instant and live happily ever after. When in the real world you don't.

Jennifer at 2013-07-09

That was amazing!

lone princess at 2013-08-05

The words, the lines.. every part of the poem is getting inside the reader, and though i have a happy life with my partner i can feel the pain. it deserves a 5/5. great work!

ketaki at 2016-07-18

Nice written, can feel the hurt.

Dill at 2016-10-09

So very sad.



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