Submission date : 2006-08-23
Last edit : 2007-04-13
CharismaticCountryGirl ( F P C D )
WOW! What a beautiful poem. My jaw dropped at the conclusion! Just amazing!
Alyson ( F P C D )
I liked it, but it didn't have much of a rhythem or a flow. I liked the setting. 5/5
Carmen ( F P C D )
Wow, that was amazing. i love how you can relate crime and love, its so perfect. i loved it. beautiful. 5/5
Mousie ( F P C D )
Awww that was sooo cute! i loved it, i thought it had wonderful flow, and great vocab.... you do an exceptional job on your poems 5/5
lizzie ( P C )
OMG THAT WAS AMAZING IDK WHAT ELSE TO SAY!!!