The Luckiest Guy (part 2)

by Goran Rahim

Dear the luckiest guy in the world
It is me again, the hopeless guy.
Writing to you another note
But I really don't know exactly why

We both have something in common
The angel that we both love.
I am writing this to take out pain
Not to make your life anymore tough.

I was always dreaming and imagining
One day she will open her eyes
Then she'll realize how much I adore her
How One day I'll be a surprise

Having you in her life
All my dreams have faded
I am just a hopeless guy
My every day is jaded.

We were not alike
That is why she chose you
I was just being myself
I was being so true

You grew up in a land
Which was full of brightness
Me, since my childhood
Got use to this darkness

You can smile all the time
As you have much happiness
I got use to teardrops
Yet for her, it is meaningless.

I had the deepest feelings
Yet never she could see
Can you do me a favor?
Advise her not to hate me

You are the luckiest guy
Finding the reality of my dream
Yet I have no complaint
As it is destiny's chosen theme

 

Submission date : 2006-09-19
Last edit : 2007-04-11

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Emily E Mehigan at 2007-09-25

Wow....I love part 2 also. Great job. <3

Valerie ( F ) at 2007-11-03

Wow I love this. Amazing ... and it really gave me some thought there :). One of the best poem I've read.

Crystal ( F P ) at 2008-06-02

That's such a sweet poem i feel sorry for the less fortunate guy he sounds sweet...

mandy ( F C D ) at 2009-03-18

It was very clever and sweet. Somewhere in the middle I lost the flow of the poem, but the rest was very well written. I enjoyed the simplicity of your words; making it easy to follow what you’re trying to tell the readers. But I also liked the meaning behind each word that you wrote, nicely done. 5/5
-mandy :)

Waina Honey at 2015-01-12

Reminds me of my ex boyfriend.. This poem makes me want to get back with him.. OH NO!



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