Submission date : 2006-10-04
Last edit : 2007-07-09
LOVE IT (I AM A SUCKER FOR POEMS THAT INVOLVE THE WORD ROSE)
-*`d0ra ( F C )
I l0ve the detail and the way u wrote this poem xx
RainbowSlider ( F P C D )
I love reading your poetry.
FlirtingWithDeath ( F P C D )
BEAUTIFUL WRITING!!! You are very talented, you were so detailed and made the poem flow. Wonderful job 5/5
Letty.... ( F P C D )
Awww!!!!! This poem is extremely beautiful! I loved the beautiful picture of romance you have painted here, The love in this poem is so strong that it pulled me all the way in and knocked me off of my feet. I love this stanza:
So my darlings take this gentle rose
Press it to your lips and caress it
As You caressed me, so I can see and remember.
This stanza made my heart skip beats. The words are so innocent, but yet they are very powerful words. The flow of this poem was just amazing. i actually got butterflies from reading this poem. lol. I think this is one of your greatest poems. You have excellent talent. Keep up the great work! 5/5 I wish that I could give you a higher vote for this one, but I can't,