Gentle roses.

by BlueDreams

My sweethearts take this gentle rose
Press it to your heart and always remember
This meeting will be our last.

Tomorrow, I go away across endless skies
To a place so different, you cannot imagine
And our meeting will be over...

Though we can imagine, we may meet again
It is improbable just as fate brought us
Together, it has taken us away...

I know in my heart we will never be
Together again, Fate planned it this way
And in our meeting love was born

A love that will not go away
Through times and places and a million miles
In generations yet to be our love will travel.

In our hearts it is burned, forever
As in our first loving and in today's
Our last we will never be apart

So my darlings take this gentle rose
Press it to your lips and caress it
As You caressed me, so I can see and remember.

And in the years to be I will remember
This time and taking such a rose
I will raise it to my own lips
And in doing, Our love will never die.

 

Submission date : 2006-10-04
Last edit : 2007-07-09

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Latest comments

Jasmine Gonzalez at 2006-10-10

LOVE IT (I AM A SUCKER FOR POEMS THAT INVOLVE THE WORD ROSE)

-*`d0ra ( F C ) at 2006-10-13

I l0ve the detail and the way u wrote this poem xx

RainbowSlider ( F P C D ) at 2006-10-15

I love reading your poetry.

FlirtingWithDeath ( F P C D ) at 2006-10-18

BEAUTIFUL WRITING!!! You are very talented, you were so detailed and made the poem flow. Wonderful job 5/5

Letty.... ( F P C D ) at 2006-11-05

Awww!!!!! This poem is extremely beautiful! I loved the beautiful picture of romance you have painted here, The love in this poem is so strong that it pulled me all the way in and knocked me off of my feet. I love this stanza:


So my darlings take this gentle rose
Press it to your lips and caress it
As You caressed me, so I can see and remember.


This stanza made my heart skip beats. The words are so innocent, but yet they are very powerful words. The flow of this poem was just amazing. i actually got butterflies from reading this poem. lol. I think this is one of your greatest poems. You have excellent talent. Keep up the great work! 5/5 I wish that I could give you a higher vote for this one, but I can't,

Best wishes
Letty



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