The Reasons I love you

by David Munoz

The Smell of your hair
The taste of your kiss
These are the things
That I will always miss

The sound of your voice
The feel of your hand
They affect me in ways
You could never understand

The love in your heart
The peace in your eyes
They make me feel
Like I want to cry

You are a gift
That God gave to me
And I can just feel
That we are meant to be

I'll love you forever
I hope you do too
For it's only a short while
Before we say "I do"

 

Submission date : 2004-03-19
Last edit : 2008-03-02

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Rachel ( F C ) at 2004-03-24

YOUR POEM IS GREAT. IT IS SO SWEET SHE IS SO LUCKY TO HAVE A GUY LIKE YOU. KEEP ON WRITING THOSE POEMS THAT YOU WRITE SO WELL BECAUSE YOU HAVE A REAL TALENT. NEVER STOP DREAMING. THANX.

Amy ( F P C ) at 2004-09-19

That's such a great and sweet poem!! I love this one too!! You have lots of talent!! Keep it up!! I look forward to reading more!!! :)

Amy

Tiffany Besing at 2007-11-07

I LOVED THIS POEM...

Valerie ( F ) at 2008-01-16

This is very cute indeed :3.

lokitaaXti at 2011-01-07

- yu have a real talent . i enjoyed readinq this poem , itts very sweet .



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