A Promise

by David Munoz

The light in your eyes
As you stare into mine
Just makes me see
God's perfect design

The warmth of your hand
The feel of your skin
Moves something inside me
Something deep within

Your feelings so gentle
Your love so sweet
I feel this passion
Every time we meet

And today I give
A promise to you
That my love will be
Honest, Faithful, and True

 

Submission date : 2004-03-20
Last edit : 2007-04-16

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Amy ( F P C ) at 2004-09-19

Awww!! I love this poem too!! This is so terrific and sweet!!! Great job on it!!

Amy

Untouchable_Angel ( F C ) at 2005-01-13

i liek this poem sooooooo much it is AWSOME

Khanyisile Cele at 2007-10-12

Short and sweet

shymoon at 2008-06-23

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shymoon at 2008-06-23

It really good i like it and i hope u keep going with this and with the situation coz it is pretty cool zeinab the shymoon



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