Cheated .

by BrokenREALiTy

Sometimes you just gotta let go,
No matter how hard it seems.
Because sometimes you just can't fix,
All your shattered dreams.

No matter how much it hurts,
Or how many tears you've shed.
It was your fault for believing,
The lies that you were fed.

With your heart throbbing,
And your stomach full of butterflies.
You can't see past the smile,
That always defies.

Mesmerized by his beauty,
You've been hypnotized by his voice.
Couldn't help but fall in love,
Giving in without a choice.

You know that he's lying,
But you still choose to ignore.
And though you can live without him,
What would you be living for?

He cheated and you know it,
You can't ignore what's there.
Gotta face the truth,
Instead of pretending you don't care.

And after writing this poem,
I think I can finally see.
That he wasn't worth the time,
And he wasn't good enough for me.
[c] 2O06 Mindy Huang

 

Submission date : 2006-11-14
Last edit : 2008-01-25

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Latest comments

jazmin at 2007-05-07

Go get em female!!!! he aint worth anything if he cheated!!! this poem just made me realize dat my ex is just garbage and i can do better.... cheaters never change and dont desearve anothe chance!! thank u!!!!! good job!!!!

Lozbi ( F C D ) at 2007-07-04

I'm a bit lost for words after reading this. I mean i absolutely loved it and i wish i could realise and move on like that. Your poems really move me and i am definetly putting you into my faves.
5/5
take care
.x

Marc Ortiz ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-06

Woah.. And again another beautifully penned work.. The ending was perfect.. It summarizes the whole poem.. Flow was flawless..

5/5 as always.

Viola x MyBrokenSmile x ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-02

Wow well this really amazed me.
again your poems present such a unique but truthful view (i really think you're quite mature for your age btw).
i'm glad you realized he wasn't worth you..cause really no guy that cheats is!
in this one I especailly loved this stanza:

No matter how much it hurts,
Or how many tears you've shed.
It was your fault for believing,
The lies that you were fed.

It really spoke to me. I feel the same way about a guy right now. Sometimes we're just too taken away by love to see clearly..thus the expression Love is Blind!
but anyways, the poem was great..i LOVE it. absolutely true and very meaningful.
keep it up! =]
--Viola

Gloria ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-29

Omg i can totally relate...it aint even funny!!!

5/5..if i could i would give u 10/5 lol



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