You'll See

by Gem

You think that now I'm all alone
I'll just crumble up and fall
But you'll see how I don't need your love
And I'll still be standing tall

You think that all I'll do is cry
And beg you to come back
But you'll see I have the dignity
And happiness you lack

You think cos of how you treated me
I'll be broken down in tears
But you'll see I'm looking forward
To the new upcoming years

You think I'll never laugh again
And be consumed in sadness
But you'll see how happy I've become
Nights out of girly madness

You think that I have nothing left
Now that you've gone away
But you'll see I couldn't care less
Cos tomorrows a brand new day ©

*Gem*

 

Submission date : 2006-12-04
Last edit : 2007-04-12

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Nobody ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-11

Quite a positive, possibly self-denying, view of a break up.

Those nights of girly madness can drive a young lad crazy though.

Lix at 2006-12-11

HELL YEAH!!!! that's graet!!!! I wish I could feel like that after a breakup.... Really awsome... U ROCK

cupidsxvictim at 2006-12-12

Wow, this poem took my breath away. I can definately tell you felt what you wrote. && that makes this poem even more stunning then it is! Keep up the great poetry.

MASCARA-TEARSā™„ ( F P C ) at 2006-12-12

"You think I'll never laugh again
And be consumed in sadness
But you'll see how happy I've become
Nights out of girly madness"

This is a great stanza hunny! I love it! This poem is very independent and strong, I love it!
xoxo

myshiningstar14 ( F P C ) at 2006-12-14

Thats so true guys assume well be that way but sumtimes you realize you nvr really were in love and you dont even shed a tear and are able to move on..excellent write



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