Is forever just a word?

by Karl Wild GG23

Is forever just a word?
Because I think it is,
To me that words absurd,
What's hers is never his.

Sure one day you'll fall in love,
But will it last forever?
Or will you lose your precious dove,
A love you thought so clever.

Fooled by seven letters,
If not "love you" then "forever",
I'd believe in forever better,
If it actually meant never.

Because forever never seems,
To end up how we planned,
Ruins our hopes and dreams,
Something I could never understand.

How a word thats so profound,
Can fail us so many times,
Although it never makes a sound,
You'll hear the pain it chimes.

So I don't believe in forever,
Because it's just a word,
Relationships always seem to sever,
Just in case you haven't heard.

 

Submission date : 2006-12-06
Last edit : 2007-04-11

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Live WeLL ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-24

Fooled by seven letters,
If not "love you" then "forever",
I'd believe in forever better,
If it actually meant never.

That is a perfect stanza. Great poem. Enough said. =]

playful*plaze* ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-06

Good poem

Used n Confussed at 2007-11-16

An amazing poem!
I really like this!
xxxx

minh at 2008-03-31

Awe... i liked this poem. I hope it is forever though. Great work 5\5

Sara ( F P C D ) at 2008-10-26

So I don't believe in forever,
Because it's just a word

i think this has changed now hasnt it baby :P... but nonetheless i loved it because i didnt believe in forever either until now :P... 5/5 great job

i lovee you <3



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