Submission date : 2006-12-13
Last edit : 2007-04-11
Sam Mayo ( F P C D )
at 2007-07-11
Awesome wording love the abab format keep up the good work
5/5
Love Fallacy ( F P C D )
at 2007-08-03
I really liked this piece. Really conveyed emotion . Keep up the good work. If you could, check out some of my work. I think you would really like it. Thank you and nice job.
playful*plaze* ( F P C D )
at 2007-08-06
Good poem
Fyri
at 2008-04-08
WOW!!!!! UMM THAT WAS SO GOOOD. LOVE IT!!
maryann
at 2008-09-05
I'll then bury her heart in the ground,
And remove it's evil seeds,
So it can't grow or ever be found,
As forever, Ivory Black it bleeds.
im lost for wordssssssss