A Poem's Kiss

by Debbylyn

A Poem's kiss
Flows from my pen
To your heart
Lingering, longing
As a silent embrace
Though we're apart

Our words touch
As lips, softly searching
Verses thrill the soul
Separation of One
In lonely sky blue
Until we are whole

Sorrows in stanzas
Writ with abundance
As tears frozen in time
Deep and lonely
'Til ocean is river
And you become mine

 

Submission date : 2007-02-18
Last edit : 2007-04-17

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Votes : 107
Rating : 4.0

Latest comments

David ( F P C D ) at 2007-03-28

I loved the ending. for this poem ended just right. i loved the way it biult up to it. bravo!

5/5 David

Barry ( F C ) at 2007-04-04

This poem will run and run....
you are....

Renan at 2007-05-16

Beatfull writting
Keep up the good work

nai at 2007-05-21

Such a lovely poem, its such a nice piece and flows so perfectly

xPinkDizzyTeacupx ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-30

In all honesty, I wasn't to keen on this one. It was like I couldn't feel the depth or emotion...Like you were holding back a little. while it certainly wasn't terrible, I think you have done better.



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