My Heart Has Two Left Feet - Triolet

by Gem

My clumsy heart has two left feet
It always trips when I see you
It starts to race and skip a beat
My clumsy heart has two left feet
It's starting now to feel the heat
Because of all the things you do
My clumsy heart has two left feet
It always trips when I see you ©

*Gem*



(In this type of poem, the first line repeats on the fourth and seventh. The second line repeats on the eighth. The rhyme scheme goes like this; A B a A a b A B. (only two rhymes are used)
Each line is 8 syllables)

 

Submission date : 2007-03-21
Last edit : 2007-04-12

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TearsFallingForOnlyYou ( F ) at 2008-02-11

Awwww

soooo sweet and sad at the same time

Adam Murphy ( F P C ) at 2008-02-26

Excellent poem.

Tania at 2008-04-26

Hey ur a good poem writer i hope to read more of urs

2tall86 at 2008-04-29

Truly worthy of being on the best poems list, Funny but true. Well written, interesting scheme.

Nz0 ( F C D ) at 2008-12-30

This is a very sweet poem. the flow was so smooth, its such a great example of a triolet and good display of ur skills as a poet.



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